Completed Short Film

So after showing my film in class and taking on board the feedback I was given, I went and fixed up all the problems. I added a title screen to the beginning of the film. I changed the font to a more elegant script style. I made two time stretches between the keyframes of the colour change scenes. I added two snapshots of the film to the end scene that were the same size as the screen this time so there was no zoom in and I raised the volume on all sounds. And this is the final outcome for my short film called 'Remember'.